21 Character Arc and Fangirl

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Lots of discussion of how to resolve the problems with my draft in progress, not nearly enough discussion of Fangirl, one of my favorite books of all time.

This really helped jolt me forward on the work, though. Nearly done with the first draft.

Got draft problems? Send me an email at sacredcheesepodcast@gmail.com and I'll address them. It's so much easier when we have an outside view. 

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