14 Conjunctions, Consequences, Murderbot

In case anyone wondered whether I have ADHD, yes! This episode proves it, if there had ever been any doubt. Also I'd had five short nights of sleep in a row AND was having an asthma attack, which makes me panic and fear for my life what with how it can actually kill you. But no, I sat there quietly recording and then today edited out all the horrible wheezy inhalations. Jeebus. However! It's about great things! That terrible comma plus and construction that I hate so much! See this post for much more, in a much more articulate format. It's also about the Murderbot books. I ADORE Murderbot. Just writing that makes me want to go read them. So good! Murderbot! It's mostly about connecting both grammatical thoughts and story ideas in a logical way that shows consequences, more so than just A + B + C. We need both, this is what I'm saying. Take that nightmarishly awful but beautifully written novel I wrote about a while back. Gorgeous sentences that added up to nothi...